Work was shelf-stacking eight to ten hours a night at a superstore in Kings Cross.

VASILIUS

--So if I can come up with enough of your great English pound it should take me half the time to get my boat.

ROGER

How long is it going to take?

VASILIUS

About a couple more years. I've already got most of the money together actually.

Enter GOLLUM, real name FRANCIS. Every store has it's own jerk-off and he's the trophy-holder for this particular place. He's skinny but bowls around as if he were Mr.T, in his late 20's, pale skinned. so called GOLLUM for his technique of sneaking around spying on people and jumping in with what they're talking about.

GOLLUM

Oh look at you two jabbering on as usual, surprise surprise getting nothing done. What's the topic today then, who can suck a better cock?

VASILIUS

Cock?What is a 'cock'?

GOLLUM

You know, prick, penis, rhymes with your name actually dunnit?- Something you probably stick up Greek boys bums.

VASILIUS

Greek boys- ? I don't understand.

ROGER

(sighing)

Just ignore the twat.

GOLLUM

(aggressively)

Who you calling a twat, four-eyes?

(silence)

GOLLUM

Never mind that, Steve wants Telly Savalas here to go help the mute clean the rubble downstairs.

VASILIUS

Charlie?

GOLLUM

Yeah you heard me. Mr.Smiley-Face. I get the prestigious honour of finishing Cereals with Rick Moranis here.

Enter a hurried Steve, one of the night branch-managers.

Steve

'Ere Francis, you tell 'em yet?

GOLLUM

Yeah Boss.

STEVE

So what you still doing here then?

ROGER

Just annoying us.

VASILIUS

So, I go now??

STEVE

Yeah go see Charlie he'll tell you what needs doing. Remind Charlie that he has his promotional hearing next week too, while you're at it.



INT. PUB near Charing Cross station.

Here we are introduced to CHARLIE ??? the protagonist of this story. He's good-looking/clean cut- some might describe as All-American boy, however he's actually British, mixed heritage. - with 4 of his co-workers from the store. ROGER/PONYTAIL is there, CLAIRE, a cuddly blonde with bright baby blue eyes who talks almost upper-class and certainly seems out of her place amongst most of the others who work at the market, joining them is also DAVID, a friend roughly the same age.

CLAIRE

Didn't you get it? (nudges Charlie)

CLAIRE

Charlie?

CHARLIE

(waking up from his daydream)

What?

CLAIRE

The joke.

CHARLIE

What joke?

ROGER

Jesus Christ Charlie, which planet did you just beam down from?

CHARLIE

(yawning)

Sorry mate. Guess I'm just tired...Yeah. Think I better be off in fact. Go and get a nap in.

CLAIRE

I'll see you off to the bus stop.

DAVID

Yeah some rest, we'll see you Monday on the site.

CLAIRE

Let's get this lazybones to bed.

ROGER

(winking)

Steady on Claire, they'll be rumours you know..?

ClAIRE and Charlie shuffle outside and trudge along the pavement. He's pretty beat but she's not so sure it's not related to physical exertion at work. CAMERA angle from the front as they walk.

CHARLIE

Sorry to be the killjoy in there.

CLAIRE

No, it's fine. I think they wanted to be alone anyway, so they can talk about birds they've shagged.

Charlie sighs.

CLAIRE

Anything the matter?

CHARLIE

Nothing really (looks downcast)

CLAIRE

(teasing)

Yeah. Clearly.

They begin to walk past a near-empty park.

CLAIRE

Want to sit for a while?

CHARLIE

Yeah.

They find themselves on the childrens swings. A little kid stops by out of nowhere, gives them a teed-off and then scampers off before CHARLIE has a chance to give him his seat.

CHARLIE

Oops. Looks like we stole someones turf.

CLAIRE

He might come back with all his mates, kick our heads in.

Sitting in silence.

CLAIRE

So did you want to hear that joke?

CHARLIE

If I have to.

CLAIRE

A copper pulls this bloke in a Ferrari over, taps on the window and says in an authoritive voice "Sir, please step out of the car." The man does what he says and the cop says "Is that your girlfriend accompanying you in the vehicle." "Yes" "Then I'm afraid I'll have to take you in for drink-driving". "Why on earth would you think I'm intoxicated" "Because, anyone who drives a car that nice and has a girl that ugly with him must be drunk."

CHARLIE

(smiling)

That's actually not bad..

CLAIRE

Big hands Charlie.

She slowly puts her hand over his. He doesn't react instantly but slowly retracts his away.

CHARLIE

I can't do that, I'm sorry.

CLAIRE

It's okay Charlie-

CHARLIE

No- but I should explain-

CLAIRE

-really, it's ok. (stands up, backing off). It's just bad timing or something right? I get it. I don't know what I was thinking anyway. So, see you!

She dashes away, again he's too late to keep someones feelings again that day.

CHARLIE

Hey, hold on!

He sits for a minute in his thoughts and then leaves. PAN TO STREET AS HE WALKS; it has begun to rain, lightly at first; a shower, but quickly grows much heavier and he is reluctantly forced to run. As he moves we switch to a BIRDSEYE view which pulls back so that people's umbrellas become like fractal patterns. We watch him dive in and out from under shop awnings until he comes to a stop at the bottom step of a public library. He looks as if he has decided it's a good place to wait out the storm.

Inside, the library exists in an old fire-station. Despite the foul weather it is only about a quarter full. We hear scattered voices. TWO OLD MEN discussing goals scored in a recent football match. Charlie wonders about aimlessly. We see shots of the differing sections history, geography, periodicals, biographies of various historical figures. Finally Charlie's interest is caught by the travel section. We see him fingering the spines of several random books until he comes across one- "The Young Dudes Guide to Japan". Flicking through it his eyes finally come to rest on something interesting (we don't see), he takes the book and sits down in a corner at a desk.

We now get to see what is written,

"On the seventh night of the seventh month, the Godess of Weaving and the Cattle Herder will have their annual visiting hour in thier celestrial prison.

The story goes, the heavenly goddess of weaving, the daughter of the Emperor of the Skies, fell in love, quite inappropriately, with a cattle herder. Their love was so deep that they spent all of their time together completely neglecting their duties (which probablly meant that they were shagging around the clock). This angered the Emperor so that he created a river to run across the skies so as to separate the two. The lovers could only see each other on the opposite sides of the river. The goddess of love pitied them and provided a boat on which they could share a stolen moment one night out of a year.
The river (Amanogawa) is the Milkyway. The Godess of Weaving (Orihimeh) is Vega. The Cattle Herder (Hikoboshi) is Altair. It is actually hard to see them on July 7th when the rain season is just coming to a close. This is because it is supposed to be based on the lunar calendar in which the seventh day of the seventh month would be sometime in the middle of August, when the skies will be clear.

CHARLIE
(n.ALMOST WHISPERING)

God. She was beautiful.


The myth probablly started in China where there are records dating back to 1st century B.C. There are similar stories in Korea, Thailand, Vietnam and Malaysia.

The custom of decorating bamboo trees started in the Edo period. You write your wish on a piece of paper and hang it on a decorated bamboo tree so that it may come true. There are also some variations depending on where in Japan you reside, some of which are holdover customs from native Shinto beliefs.
"
Yamamoto Tsunetomo wrote in his 'Hagakure' his definition of the spirit of the Samurai.
The essence of bushido is death.... One must live each day, from every dawn to every eve, with determination to die, to repent and to die again. A man who intends to die honorablly in everything he does shall be truely free in his warriorhood and shall not fail in his life.
War brings out the best and the worst in a man. And each best and worst is defined by ones actions. You are defined by your actions. This wisdom has been discovered and rediscovered in every conflict in history.

Bushido is a philosophy that places a man in the face of clear and present danger, in the midst of death and fear, to the brink where cowardice or valor is smoked out of the man, and dare to stare the fear in the eye and stare for the rest of his life.
In each and every case, you must choose the course in which you are more likely to die. There is no reason. Just advance with confidence. He who says that death without success is a futile death is an arrogant city-boy warrior. No one can succeed every time. Selfish men prefer to live, and must twist their reasons to suit their wish for life. Through a choice thus taken, should you fail and live, you shall be a coward. If you fail and die, you may be a crazy fool, but there is no shame. That is the important thing for the samurai warrior.
Define yourselves by your actions in the face of death. That is the essence of bushido."

As he reads we angle on his eyes, which are obviously growing heavier. FADE OUT to:

CHARLIE

It all started on a trip to Amsterdam..

EXT.AMSTERDAM, THE NETHERLANDS

We next go to a montage of Charlie wandering around Holland the capital city, but instead of it being a picturesque scenic tourist book gallery we are being shown transitions of the darker and some might say more entertaining;  menus of many types of weed, hookers, extravagant pimps, beggars, burly bouncers standing outside packed-out dance clubs. Charlie is seen walking around, enjoying a few beers in the pub, looking wide-eyed at gorgeous hookers, laughing out loud at a dancing bum.

CHARLIE(N)

I'm not an impulsive type, but Ponytail had been banging on about it for months..

PONYTAIL (n)

(His narration has some echo to the voice as if he is talking through a loud-speaker)

-facking weed everywhere in the 'Stam. None of that backyard shite you'd get over here neither, real weed straight son from Afghanistan and Thailand. And if that doesn't take your fancy the fucking birds over there'll have you tapdancing in the streets.

CHARLIE(N)

Well, like he mentioned I'm not much of a druggie, but who doesn't like tall, angular blondes. (Does an American accent) Hell yeah.

Now we can see a WALK-CAM FP view from CHARLIE's eyes. He's in the Red-Light zone, we see many girls in neon-lit boxes giving him beckoning eyes. It's just their job but he doesn't know that, the camera shows us.Finally it falls on one particularly attractive BRUNETTE. Tall, slender wearing nothing but matching scarlet bra & underwear. She speaks with a non-identifiable European accent.

PROSTITUTE

You're a cute one...

He doesn't know what to say, but stands there, obviously keen.

PROSTITUTE

But not much of a talker. Why don't you come in?

With the door now open he finds it impossible not to step inside.
INT.   DIMLY-LIT BEDROOM

The are cushioned with a hue that matches her underwear, to set her apart. There is an odor in there, we see it on CHARLIE'S face.

PROSTITUTE

So, what is your desire? You take yours straight-up, or do you have some kind of a fetish?

He's still not saying much.

PROSTITUTE

If you like I have got a latex catsuit and a-

CHARLIE

Straight.

PROSTITUTE

Ok, you got it.

She motions for him to sit on the couch. We don't get to see much on CAMERA except that takes one of many condoms lying on the vanity table and is on her knees in front of him attempting to massage his trousers. He's not getting hard.

PROSTITUTE

Not a lot I can do here, you know?

CHARLIE

(nerves beginning to show)

Yeah. I dunno. I-

PROSTITUTE

Well--

CHARLIE

Maybe we could just talk for a bit.

PROSTITUTE

Okay, as long as you know the clocks ticking and I still get paid

CHARLIE

No problem

PROSTITUTE

(rests on the couch next to him)

So what's your name?

CHARLIE

Umm.. John

PROSTITUTE

This your first time with a prostitute Charlie?

CHARLIE

Yeah

PROSTITUTE

Don't worry. Lots of guys have the same issue first time 'round.

Cathartic experience.

INT.SUPERMARKET

A quiet scene with CHARLIE stacking washing-powder in the aisle. There's voices around him but they're dim and overpowered by the music coming through his walkman. Audible is a conversation between GOLLUM and VASILIUS.

GOLLUM

--family. You trying to tell me someone actually married you? Bugger me, what did you do, kidnap her parents first?

VASILIUS

No Francis, believe what you like but she consented to be my wife quickly after I asked.

GOLLUM

That's alright I think I've figured out how you did it, I've seen things like that on the Jerry Springer show. The bloke comes on with his girlfriend thinking he's on the show for their anniversary- only then he finds out it's actually because she wants to confess she's is actually a 'he'.

VASILIUS

That's a nice story but I can assure you that it is not the case with us.

GOLLUM

You sure?

Enter Steve in his usual hurried manner.

STEVE

Goll-er, Francis do you mind taking yourself and your filthy mouth down to tins and jams.

GOLLUM

What with fucking John the wino? Great, well I do actually mind, but since it's my job..(starts to go) Here, Vaseline-us.

VASILIUS

What?

GOLLUM

You done her up the arse yet?

VASILIUS

What?

GOLLUM

(laughing)

Bet you did you dirty rotter..

STEVE

Francis- go, now please!

GOLLUM

(almost out of shot)

You know you don't own her till you've done the rusty muffler!

Vasilius gives an audible sigh. Catching Steves eyes.

STEVE

I know what you're thinking. Why is he here? Right?..Well if we weren't short on staff... Even so, believe it or not, he's actually faster than most at his job.

VASILIUS

OK.

The sounds fade. We angle on CHARLIE from opposite as he moves along the aisle stacking. Closing up on his profile, we can see he's on auto-pilot. We see flashes of the girl he met, close-ups of her eyes, and teeth when she smiles.

FADE OUT

INT. ROSE & CROWN PUB.COLLINDALE

CHARLIE is reading the paper at a random pub he walked into. There are no distinguishing effects to the pub except for the fact that it seems rather well-looked after. The BARMAN is behind the counter and something in his eyes changes when he notices CHARLIE behind the paper. He walks over, bringing a pint CHARLIE ordered.

BARMAN

Cor Blimey. When was the last time you saw a razor?

CHARLIE is both part-offended part-amused. He peers over the top of the paper and eyes the BARMAN up-and-down before replying;

CHARLIE

Probably about the same time you last saw your belt-line.

The BARMAN stares at him in a curious manner, and talks just before CHARLIE is about to go back to reading.

BARMAN

I see you don't remember me at all then, young Charlie Gallant.

Charlie takes another look over his paper, and seconds later it drops.

CHARLIE

(stands with rare burst of emotion)

Bugger me! If it isn't MR.FITZGERALD.

It's an old kindergarten teacher of CHARLIE'S. ROY FITZGERALD is tall, bit of a beer belly, crimson hair. FITZGERALD resembles an owl, with deep-set emotional eyes beneath a bushy brow.

FITZGERALD

Bugger you indeed, though I'd rather just serve drinks if it's all the same

CHARLIE

(shaking head)

How did I not recognise you when I came in? You look exactly the same.

FITZGERALD

Not exactly. Few tokens of age here and there, receeding hairline, liver spots, bit of a tire around the old belly (taps stomach). Still a handsome bastard though, wouldn't you agree?

FITZGERALD

Booze and smokes have killed my singing voice though, poor me.

CHARLIE

(grinning)

I'd say that has more to do with a certain 'lack of talent' in the first place, if memory serves.

FITZGERALD

Cheeky devil.

CHARLIE

Ahem. Like I said, you haven't changed.(pause) Wow, so you work here now?

FITZGERALD

Work? (knocks on counter) THIS is my bar. My old fellas, before he croaked.

CHARLIE

Nice. So you gave up teaching?

FITZGERALD

About 10 year ago. Nice enough job, but it's a young mans game, teaching kiddies. I don't have the grunt for it these days. Especially when the occasional little uncontrollable turd comes along. That's you I'm picturing when I say that.

CHARLIE

Was I that bad? I can't remember a thing about those days.

FITZGERALD

Let's just say you gave us all a few headaches. Your dad was great thou- no hang-on he was your granddad wasn't he.

CHARLIE

That's right.

FITZGERALD


 I remember your granddad coming in to school to see us, what was he, like 70 or something.  Striding in with his cane and white fedora.  We used to call him ‘The General’- he certainly had a presence. Wouldn't have looked out of place in a Havana mansion.

Came in here for a pint once, your grand-pop he did.  Talked about you the whole time as if you were good-as-gold.  Tell you what he must've had more control over you then we did then. Of course, he had been in the war and as I remember he always carried medals they’d given him around in his jacket pockets.  Couldn’t believe it when he told me he’d raised you alone by himself. Not an easy job for an old fella.  Mind you he was the valiant type of yore, not like the young these days, who would shit liquid if they were involved in a Nazi onslaught on anywhere other than their Sony Playstation's. We never had anything like that in Iraq.  Most we did was trace Scuds and analyse aerial photography. Didn’t know who or what we were killing.

CHARLIE

You heard he died, right?

FITZGERALD

(sympathetic)

No. Really? That's a tragedy.  A real loss of a fine man. When was it?

CHARLIE

Just a few days ago, actually.

FITZGERALD

Sorry for your loss.

CHARLIE

Had to happen sooner or later, he was in his 90's.

FITZGERALD

Well. That drink is on the house.

CHARLIE

Thanks.

EXT. DOORWAY AT CHARLIE'S FRIENDS HOUSE (LEE WONG)

SIDE-VIEW of CHARLIE at the door of his. From an adjacent window we can hear TAKE THAT. It's "COULD IT BE MAGIC" accompanied by atrocious singing from a badly accented Asian voice inside.

BOYBAND WONG

Come. Come. Come into my arms. Let me feel the wonder-

CHARLIE

Wong.

BOYBAND WONG

--of all of you, could it be magic.

ChARLIE

BOYBAND WONG!!

The singing stops and seconds later a head pops out from around the door. It's CHARLIES friend BOYBAND WONG. He's in his early 20's, cute, naive, hopeless fashion-sense.

BOYBAND WONG

I told you, you don cawl me that Charwlie!

CHARLIE

Can I come in or what?

BOYBAND WONG

Sure. (mimics the song he was singing) Come. Come. Come into my house. Could I be the best singer in this town or what?

CHARLIE

Or what.

INT. FRONT ROOM

BOYBAND WONG

How about an E then, sir? said Wong as he handed Jim the baggie. 

CHARLIE

I wont say no. Smilies?

BOYBAND WONG

The eye-rollers

CHARLIE

Good.Good.

WONG hands him a baggie. CHARLIE takes an e, drops it, and then hands WONG a fiver from his back pocket. CHARLIE notices NO RETREAT NO SURRENDER being played on an old BETAMAX VCR. The quality is piss-poor.

CHARLIE

(groaning)
This is such a shit movie


Wong nods as he exhales out billowing marijuana clouds.

BOYBAND WONG

Van Damme is in it though, isn't it?

CHARLIE

He's only in it for 5 minutes!

BOYBAND WONG

Still Van Damme though.

WONG offers the bong to CHARLIE, who refuses.

BOYBAND WONG

(raising eyebrows)

This chinks hash no good enough for you eh?

CHARLIE

How's it going with that Spanish bird?


BOYBAND WONG

No man, it aint going anywhere anymore, she fucking crazy, she crazier like tha' bitch downstair always fuck talking her fucking cats all the time.
"Oh you broke up?"
"Yeah.  Her moody, too Latin and moody that bitch was.".

CHARLIE

Ok never mind. Why's it so dark in here?

BOYBAND WONG

Oh I was fucking around wid my chuckas and I smashed the lightbulb, hold on a minute, I just remembered I got spare somewhere.


WONG whistles his way into the kitchen and CHARLIE has a rummage through his video collection.

CHARLIE

(shouting)

Hey Wong, got any Japanese movies?

BOYBAND WONG

No.

CHARLIE

Not even any Japanese martial arts movies?

BOYBAND WONG

Got some samurai movie, probably not your cuppa tea though


WONG comes hurtling back through the kitchen and nearly trips over a stack videos in the way in.  He made space on the desk to stand on and starts talking as he screws in the bulb.

BOYBAND WONG

You know, I'll probably get a DVD player soon. I wasn't going to bother but I read somewhere that the DVD for Rocky has pretty facking cool Easter Egg in it.

CHARLIE

Easter Egg?

BOYBAND WONG

You know, like, special feature on DVD that can only be activated if you know the codes to make it work. Secret stuffs.

CHARLIE

Like what?

BOYBAND WONG

Like in 'ROCKY' you get a feature of Stallone as himself and Rocky talking to each-other like they are old mates.


CHARLIE doesn't react.

BOYBAND WONG

That's wicked, right?

CHARLIE

But haven't you already got Rocky though?

BOYBAND WONG

Yeah but..

CHARLIE

You're gonna spend what? How much is it?

BOYBAND WONG

Like, 20 quid.

CHARLIE

20 quid. Just for that.

BOYBAND WONG

Yeah.

CHARLIE

That's just crazy.

WONG goes back to his bong.

BOYBAND WONG

So Charlie, how come you want see some Japanese movies?

CHARLIE

No particular reason.

BOYBAND WONG

Oh yeah? You into some Asian culture now? Summit?

CHARLIE

Yeah, maybe a little bit..

BOYBAND WONG

Well, tell you what, you know there's this thing - event -  in Chinatown for us Oriental next week.

CHARLIE

Nah, not interested mate.

BOYBAND WONG

You sure, I can't get out of it because my parents are expecting me there, but I don't want to go there alone and I figure if you're not doing anything..It's got free Chinese food.

CHARLIE

No..oh ….free? Serious?

BOYBAND WONG

Yeah man, much Chow Mein as you can handle.


As WONG is taking another hit on his pipe, the doorbell rings.  To WONGs surprise and dismay CHARLIE jumps up to answer it before he can be stopped.  WONG lurches up, coughing up smoke-

BOYBAND WONG

Wait! Don' answer tha--

But it's too late. Standing at the door is a MAN in a grey pinstripe business suit carrying a board and a pen in the other hand.

MAN

(loudly)

Good Evening Sir (points to ID card hanging on his chest).Paul Roberts from the Television Licensing Company, do you live here?

CHARLIE

No. The tenant is inside.

There was a sound of chairs falling over and videos being thrown astray from the back room.  The television man stretches his neck in an effort to see what chaos is prevailing. He's seen this happen a few times.

MAN

(impatient)

May I come in?

CHARLIE

(wry smile)

Why, yes, most certainly do..


CHARLIE lets Paul Roberts in as he himself leaves. We pan to Paul Roberts vision. In the front room, the television had mysteriously dissapeared but the left on the desk where it had once stood were wires and tv connectors and clean rectangle where no dust is. Obvious to all and sunder that a TV has just been moved. We see a guilty looking WONG standing alert.

FADE OUT



EXT. WONGS CAR. LONDON STREETS


ROGER in the back, CHARLIE and WONG are travelling in Wong's van. It's truly on it's last legs, done over 150,000, exhaust fumes all over the place. Almost embarrasing for the other two to ride in.

BOYBAND WONG

100 fucking quid it's gonna cost me for that telly license you know..That's a lot of fucking money for me.

CHARLIE

Ah come on. They catch everyone sooner or later.

BOYBAND WONG

It don't help you letting them in friends houses though eh. pfff.man, first STEPS break up, now this.

CHARLIE

Doesn't your uncle own a pretty fancy Chinese restaurant off Kings Cross? You could go work for him couldn't you?

BOYBAND WONG

Work? I never work. only stupid people work. I sell hash.

CHARLIE

How much does that bring in? Like, a fiver a day or something. That's not real money.

BOYBAND WONG

Yeah but soon I gonna start selling harder stuff. Got some good contacts now.

CHARLIE

Should get off that shit, Wong. (pause)Anyway, I can't believe you're still driving this heap-of-junk car. I thought you were going to pick us up in something dignified.

BOYBAND WONG

This a good fuckin' car man! you know nothing.

WONG puts a tape into the cassette player. It's BACKSTREET BOYS "AS LONG AS YOU LOVE ME".

BOYBAND WONG

"Don' care who you is, where are you from, don't care wha' you doing as long as you love me!"

ROGER gives CHARLIE a are-you-fucking-kidding-me? look in the mirror.

PONYTAIL

This ain't happening man, this ain't happening.

BOYBAND WONG

(loudly)

What my man, you don't like good music?

PONYTAIL

Hey I like good music. But this is shit. Is this guy for real?Gotta be a fucking wind-up

CHARLIE

What you see is what you get, my friend.

PONYTAIL

Boyband Wong indeed. I thought you were pulling my plonker when you said that was his name.

CHARLIE

(laughing)

Oh God, you weren't supposed to say-

BOYBAND WONG

Hey! You no call me that. (taps CHARLIE who is in near hysterics) why you bring you great-grandfather along to party man?

PONYTAIL chuckles at the obvious truth of the statement. He is far too old to be hanging out with two young bucks on the hunt for some poon.

BOYBAND WONG

We get no women yo! They run screaming "Aaahhh! Old man, old dirty man!"

PONYTAIL

(smirking)

OK. OK. I apologise. Hands on the wheel now.

BOYBAND WONG

Why I bring you guys, I dunno..

Minutes pass in silence.

BOYBAND WONG

Hey we neary there!

CHARLIE

(suddenly)

Oh my God, did one of you just let rip in here? Jeezus!


EXT. DOME THEATRE

They pass by OUT-OF-CAR-WINDOW shot of a monolithic dome structure, for annual events big groups of people. Aesthetically stunning inside cavity.Literally thousands of people attend. converted for Chinese New Year. Fumes from steam-cooked food. WONG parks the car and they follow directions to the entrance. Along the way we can see lavish decorations, paper flyers hang from walls, throbs of people line to get in. Chinese music.We can see lots of lucky red and gold. The event is on a more formidable scale than CHARLIE or PONYTAIL had imagined. Families, most at least partly Asian.

INT.DOME THEATER

Inside, crowds of people -mostly Chinese, enjoy the variety of oriental food stalls. In the center square are about a hundred rows of seats and eating tables, which incidentally also make  nice viewing position for spectators the prominent stage that dominates the theatre.

PONYTAIL

Where's the shitter at?

He goes off and leaves CHARLIE and WONG alone.

Portly, slightly elderly and nervous ASIAN WOMAN shuffles up to the podium.

ANNOUNCER

(clears throat)

..Greetings ladies and gentleman. Welcome to the Pan-Annual Chinese New Year event here at the Florian Palace. We would like to introduce for your pleasure the Symphony contempary performance of the Gordon Street Orchestra with conductor Li Lang.

She then repeats the same statement in Chinese.smiling. hobbyists pension-age reflects in their playing which is poorly arranged. Most of the crowd are ignorant.

BOYBAND WONG

(cringes, looks at CHARLIE)

I know, who drowning the cat, right? Not my kind of music. Hungry?

CHARLIE

(nodding)

Yeah. Starving. Let's go eat.

They browse around the perimeter of the room, surveying the many  types of food on sale. ANGLE OF stalls with the names VIETNAMESE , KOREAN, JAPANESE, SECHUAN, MALAY.

BOYBAND WONG

Think I'm going to go for Chinese over there.

He wonders off naturally and disappears into the crowd.

Bowls of noodles in pork miso broth. He forgot to get a fork. Charlie looks around, anxious, embarrassed, trying to get the attention of the staff and hoping not to be seen in the process. He tries to use the chopsticks but he can't. We see him fumble around trying to eat noodles, he manages a few but can't.

CHARLIE

Shit.

Blah blah. a hang with a fork in it. CHARLIE looks up. Smiling back at him is the girl he met. She clearly enamours him.

CHARLIE

It's you.

Ethereal seconds pass. Freeze frame on CHARLIE's face which then


AND THEN...

Time sequence event. It's been plain sailing. CHARLIE adores her terribly. She's literally turned his life upside down in a positive manner. His personality has been affected by her, he's more much more chatty,
This evidence be seen in a montage of their relationship for the past year. We see it in his sleep one night. Flashes of them together doing things couples deeply in love do, candlelit dinners, movies, slow walks on the beach,. Something akin to a karaoke video.

As this is happening we hear a narrative from KUMIKO:

KUMIKO (n)

That was the best time. To think I'd meet my greatest love far from the shores of my country. Little did he know, I came from a shattered past.

1 YEAR LATER. SCOTLAND

ROAD CAM of the streets. CHARLIE and KUMIKO are on a trip through Inverness. His grandfather owned a house there that CHARLIE inherited after his death. SEVERAL ANGLES of them driving through the very rural bends of the road, it's beautiful, mysterious. LAST  MOVING SHOT towards the windscreen, we see pan towards the couple.

KUMIKO

(browsing HELLO!)

-if only I looked anywhere near as gorgeous as Gywneth Paltrow.

CHARLIE

Come on, you're ten times sexier.

KUMIKO

You've got to be joking. Look at her legs- well, I mean not now while you're driving. She's so well proportioned.

CHARLIE

Yeah but she's too clean-cut looking for me. I like exotic.

KUMIKO

Is that what I am?

CHARLIE

Yep. She does have a warm personality though, goes a long way.

KUMIKO

God. I'd die for those legs.

CHARLIE

Give me a chainsaw- I'll go get 'em for you.

KUMIKO

(laughs)

Your sense of humour..very..what's the word?

CHARLIE

Twisted.

KUMIKO

Twisted. I like it.

He throws her an affectionate grin. One year has passed and he still loves her as dearly as the day they met. Pulls over.

CHARLIE

Not long till we're there now.

CHARLIE

I've got something for you.

Inside, encased in acrylic and wood frame lens, was a tiny brass roller organette.

KUMIKO

(excited)

Where'd you ever find this?

CHARLIE

I was just walking past this old antiques shop one day. Saw it in the window and thought of you. I know you'd probably prefer flowers, but somehow.. I dunno !I guess it's just something more memorable.

Seems kind of..odd and she fondles it with a mixture of curiosity and mingled confusion, but she twists the dial at the underside of the box and the organette springs to life, the melody of Schuberts Ave Maria rings off clearly in sequence as each note is plucked from the pins as the barrel turns minutely. It suddenly seems to her to be a very appropriate and heartfelt gift. CHARLIE watches her face, a Mona Lisa-esque look of tranquility. Starts driving. As they reach a higher elevation the radio breaks a little.

RADIO VOICE

..had a Lynch living *zz* town; and the more I ref*zz*ed upon his impending doom, the mor*zz* could not sleep..

CHARLIE

This damn thing.

He fiddles with tuner, attempting to find a channel.

CHARLIE

Knew we should've some CD's. Oh hang on. (another station tuned in) I think I've got it.

BACKSEAT ANGLE. Oblivious to KUMIKO, who is staring lovingly at her  gift still, and CHARLIE who is busy with the radio, the viewer can see a wild buck lope onto the road only meters ahead of the vehicle. SLOWMO view of KUMIKO's eyes as lift and see the creature. There is little time for her to scream before WHAM! the car hurtles into it. As it's body collides to hear a terrifying animal wail and thumping noise, it's body breaking the bonnet before spinning off accompanied with rapid braking, tires smoking on the road. INSIDE CAMERA shakes. Blood from severed arteries on its neck sprays across the windscreen, which shatters from the impact, LAP SHOT of shards of glass all over CHARLIE and KUMIKO's lap.  Car comes to halt. CHARLIE CAM VIEW of his hands, covered in blood. He is breathing heavily from shock. For a few desperate seconds he's totally convinced he's been killed. We hear CHARLIE'S heartbeat after the crash. He's fine but he sees KUMIKO looking away, unmoving.

CHARLIE

Kumiko!.Are you ok?!

Grabs her hand and shakes her by the shoulders. No response. Her eyes are shut. He screams, more panic.

CHARLIE

KUMIKO!!!

Her eyes open. She is just stunned.

KUMIKO

(whisper)

Charlie..

Waves of relief visible on CHARLIE's face.

CHARLIE

Thank God. For a minute there..

KUMIKO

My head hurts.

CHARLIE

Try moving your body a bit.

She does and she's ok.

KUMIKO

I'm not injured. I'm just sore I think I banged my head. But not seriously.

With some effort, CHARLIE gets out of the car. The vehicle is a write-off, steam rises from the engine, which is still running albeit emitting a number of irregular noises. The bonnet is bent into an unrecognisable shape, small rivers of blood have pooled in the crevices, dripping from the framework. CHARLIE is taken aback by how much damage the accident caused.

CHARLIE

Jeessus..

He sees the deers body 10 meters down the road and walks over. The body is crumpled and broken, glazed over white eyes stare back at him, dead. He travels back to Kumiko, pulling open her door, jammed. She rests against a nearby tree. CHARLIE steps around back and forth on the gravel gathering himself and wondering what to do.

KUMIKO

Is it dead?

CHARLIE

(sighing)Yeah. He just jumped came out of nowhere, didn't he..

From the distance, we can see there is a vehicle manouvering around the mountain road they came on. CHARLIE VIEW we get a shot of it disappearing from behind trees bending around trees, getting closer and closer. Rusted T-Series 1972 Bentley. As the car approaches the driver sees what happens, pulls by the couple. He's late 50's, has a wiry beard and curly hair pokes beneath a beret, driving glasses and gloves, looks slightly aristocratic.

DRIVER

(peering out the couple)

Quite an accident you've had here. Strike a deer?

CHARLIE nods and points the the dead creature.

DRIVER

Aye, happens all the time around these parts. 

CHARLIE

(raises eyebrows)

Oh yeah?

DRIVER

Yes indeed. Red deer thrive in these valleys. We've been on about, we- I mean 'us' the local community- have been on about getting some stalkers through here for ages. They've been bouncing off peoples bonnets like tennis balls as of late. TThey keep getting in people's way all the time. Anyway, are you alreet?


CHARLIE

We're fine, just a little shook up. (looks around) Any idea on how to handle...this?


DRIVER

(points to a box on his dashboard)

Got a deer whistle on my one.


DRIVER

Yes well, first you should contact the AA. Police should be informed as well about the deer.  Listen, the nearest town is 30 minutes away, you may as well hop in as they'll need you to guide them here, I'm going that way. You'll have a hard time explaining where this place is otherwise. I'm going that way anyway. Best call your insurance company first?

CHARLIE

Ah but it's a rental.

DRIVER

OK then give them a bell.

DRIVER

Names Reginald by the way.

CHARLIE

Charlie. (pause) Oh, and this is Kumiko, my girlfriend.

REGINALD

Pleasure to meet you dear, how are you feeling?

KUMIKO

Ah, you know, so-so. Bit, um, shaken up?

REGINALD

It's never nice having an accident is it?

KUMIKO

Yeah. It is the first time for me.

REGINALD

Really? Oh, I've been in dozens. Mostly has more to do with spending too much time down the pub than anything else though. Still have my license, shockingly.



We cut to another scene of the vehicle arriving in the entrance of a quaint, idyllic Scottish village, we see cutscenes of CHARLIE in the police office with REGINALD, also outside on the street talking with various companies on the phone, with clips of him occasionally switching the phone to REGINALD who by and large is being a proper gent and keeping KUMIKO company inside an antique tea shop while this is happening. Finally CHARLIE comes in, clicks his mobile phone shut, and sits down.


CHARLIE

Done. (exhales) Phew. Long day so far. Hey Reginald, thanks for everything.

KUMIKO

Yes. Thanks.

REGINALD

No problem. I was just enjoying getting to know you're lovely lady here. So she tells me you've a house in ---. That's quite a journey from here to there. Is the rental agency sending out another car for you?

CHARLIE

Hmm. No. They say we can pick one up if we go by one of their car lots. Trouble is the nearest one is in Glasgow. So we're umm, kind of buggered really..

REGINALD

What are you going to do?

CHARLIE

I don't know.

REGINALD

If you've no better plans I can put you up for the night. What say you?

CHARLIE

No it's OK. We can get a hotel around here--

REGINALD

Ridiculous! Believe me, I've plenty of space. Would welcome the company to be honest. Gets lonely in these old hills. Never wanted to see a real Scottish home?

KUMIKO

(looks at CHARLIE longingly)

Well I wouldn't mind--

REGINALD

There you are! She's sold.

CHARLIE

Hmmmmm...OK then (smiles)

REGINALD

Great. I'm warning you though, it's only a wee place.

They head off back into the countryside, an hour later they arrive at a converted SCOTTISH CASTLE. It's clear now that REGINALD is well-monied and possibly some kind of blue-blood.

KUMIKO

Wow. You live...here?

REGINALD

Yes. And my fathers before me.

CHARLIE

I thought you said it was only a small place?

REGINALD

Well, yessir. (grins) I've bigger homes abroad.

The front door is opened by a well-dressed butler.

We see many placards on the wall. SHOT of one reading: IN RECOGNITION OF SUPPORTIVE CHARITABLE EFFORTS FOR THE 'CHRISTIAN EMERALD CHILDREN'S CANCER TRUST' REGINALD CARNEGIE, 21ST EARL OF DRUMMOND.

CHARLIE

You live here all by yourself?

REGINALD

Pretty much. With the butler and a couple of cooks.

KUMIKO

Must be lonely sometimes.

REGINALD

It can be aye, indeed. But I'm alright.

CHARLIE

No family? Wife? Kids?

REGINALD

Ah here and there. As for a wife, yes I was married once. A long time ago. She's gone now.

The butler comes down from taking their bags up to the room.

BUTLER

Sir Carnegie. Dinner will be served in an hours time. The dining room has been set for you and your guests.

REGINALD

Good. Could you fetch us a couple of coffees and I'll have a brandy.

BUTLER

Certainly.

They go into the guest room.

CHARLIE

What happened?

REGINALD

I was selfish I suppose. I could never be satisfied. She was a good woman in every way but despite her best efforts she couldn't keep a hold on me, I was always off dallying about down the pub or having a rendezvous with secret girlfriends in Glasgow. I thought I'd never lose her but one day I came home and she'd gone. Weeks passed and then it truly hit me how special she was to me. Too late by then of course. She died  only a few years after during a routine surgical operation, before I could ever win her back. Well, if I'd have known then what I know now. -Sad fact of life is, the older you get the more difficult it is to find people who love about you. I hadn't realized that yet. I suppose the moral of this story, what I've been trying to say is, you two may have been born thousands of miles apart, but what you have here is a rather special bond. Whatever happens don't ever take it for granted that you have each-other.


As CHARLIE sleeps besides her on the bed we see her take out an envelope from her purse. ANGLE from behind the note she takes from the envelope. As she reads we see her eyes widen in shock. She looks at him then back to the letter, which she drops on the side of the bed. FADE OUT

INT. CHARLIE'S BEDROOM ABOVE THE PUB- MORNING.

Sun pokes through the windows. CHARLIE gets up . The note reads "GOODBYE CHARLIE.I'M SORRY. I LOVE YOU" He looks at it in anguish.

CHARLIE

Whaattt??...Is this some kind of...what the fuck? This can't be real.

He goes downstairs with urgency. Fitzgerald is there behind the bar with a couple of regulars.

CHARLIE

(anxiously)

Hey, did you see Kumiko anytime this morning?

FITZGERALD

(shaking head)

No. Are you expecting her?

CHARLIE

She stayed round last night. I meant did you see her leave?

FITZGERALD

Sorry. Hey Charlie, did you hear this one, there's a bloke in the pub with his ex-wife-

CHARLIE

(on his way out)

-Yeah, later, later. And if Kumiko comes by tell her to call me immediately alright?

FITZGERALD

(watches him leave)

Why certainly, master. (looks at customer) Hear that? (mimics a stupid voice) call me imme-dia-tely

We see angles of CHARLIE walking around the streets of London, visiting several places that KUMIKO can usually be found at. We can clearly see the time.. turns from day to night day to night. Finally we come back to CHARLIE in his BEDROOM, rereading the note.

CHARLIE

(panicking)

WHAT THE FUCK!

Screws up the note. Throws it in a corner. Seconds later he picks it up, hands trembling, unfolds it.There's a knock on the door. CHARLIE opens it. It's FITZGERALD.

FITZGERALD

(looking around the room)

You alright? Heard a bit of commotion up here.

CHARLIE hands him the note. FITZGERALD reads it with a queer look on his face and hands it back, not sure what to say.

CHARLIE

(pacing around the room)

Gotta..gotta be some kind of a joke!

FITZGERALD

I hope so. Did you two have some sort of a blow-out?

CHARLIE

No!

FITZGERALD

You sure?

CHARLIE

(kicking the dustbin against the wall)

Yes!

FITZGERALD

Alright alright. Take a breath there Charlie. I'm sure there's a simple reason behind all this. Has to be.

CHARLIE

(sitting on the bed)

Yeah? Well I wish I had a clue because I'm totally in the dark here Fitzgerald. As far as I know we were doing great.(pause) This just doesn't make any sense- FUCK!

FITZGERALD

Hey calm down there--

CHARLIE

(screaming)

SON OF A BITCH!!

FITZGERALD

Really Charlie, there's customers downstairs you know?

CHARLIE

Oh fuck them!(relaxes) Man. I looked everywhere today, her college. She didn't go all last week. Spoke to her friends, none of them have seen her for ages. It's like she vanished.

FITZGERALD

Don't you have any home phone number for her in Japan?

CHARLIE

Not really. All I have is this.

He pulls out an address scribbled onto a memo pad note. It is written in both English, and below in Japanese.

CHARLIE

One of her friends had it. Got no phone number. Nothing. I can't get a number for that place either. I tried the Japanese Embassy this afternoon but it's not listed.

FITZGERALD

Damn.

CHARLIE

There's not a goddamn way or means of finding out where the hell she is right now.

FITZGERALD

Hmm..

CHARLIE

We went up to goddamn Scotland together the other week!

FITZGERALD

Women eh?..Do you want to come down and talk about it? I've got to get back-

CHARLIE

-Nah. (sighing) I've got to get out of here, clear my head. Sorry for the racket.

INT.WORK EVENING

PONYTAIL

Nothing left of her eh?

CHARLIE

No. Just this one photograph.

He shows Roger a photograph of KUMIKO from his shirt breast-pocket. She is smiling, and looks pretty in her Japanese KIMONO, a traditional gear and make-up done for her 20th birthday celebration years ago.


PONYTAIL

So she just upped and took-off huh? Without a trace?

CHARLIE

That's about it. Not even a goodbye.

Gollum suddenly peers his head around the corner.

GOLLUM

Should've gone out with an English bird, Smiley.

PONYTAIL

You sneaky cunt. Listened to the whole thing did you?

CHARLIE

What fucking business is it of yours anyway??!

GOLLUM

Me? I have ears.

CHARLIE

Go on piss off back to your hole.

GOLLUM

(threatening)

Oh yeah you gonna make me?

CHARLIE steps forward. PONYTAIL stops him, shaking his head.

PONYTAIL

It ain't worth it. You'll get the sack.

CHARLIE thinks about it and turns around back to his work, furious.

GOLLUM

(sniggering as he walks away)

Besides you're both pussies anyway.

PONYTAIL

You'll get yours one day. Just wait and see.

CHARLIE

Someday soon.

GOLLUM

(calling)

Yeah but not by some old geezer with a queer haircut.

PONYTAIL

(turns to CHARLIE)

Best just to ignore that twat, what with your pay rise coming next week.

CHARLIE

Christ is he a wind-up merchant. Makes  you wonder if his dad didn't rape him  as a kid or something.

PONYTAIL

He's just a loser. Not worth the time of day. Anyway Charlie I've got to be heading back to Meats now. Catch you later.

CHARLIE

Bye.

Later on blah blah blah. In aural vicinity

VASILIUS

Oh so you've been sent over to help me then? Greeeat.

GOLLUM

Yeah. Don't put me to sleep with your dreams about your boat that'll never happen talk about something interesting.

VASILIUS

Okay. Let's talk about pussy right?

GOLLUM

As if you get any. When was the last time you got laid? probably 'bout the same time we won the World Cup.

VASILIUS

Yes.Go ahead and believe that if you want to believe that.

GOLLUM

Still you can't be getting any less pussy than Charlie these days.

VASILIUS

Well--

GOLLUM

You heard right?

VASILIUS

Yes. Unfortunate circumstances.

GOLLUM

Should just stay away from Chinks if you ask me. Bad news the lot of 'em.

VASILIUS

Chinks? She was Japanese.

GOLLUM

Chinks?Japs? Whatever, same shit. All dinks.

VASILIUS

Do you ever stop?

GOLLUM

(laughing)

I mean imagine that, him shagging  that sideways gash (mimics a shrieky Asian girls voice) "Do meee Chawrleee Do mee!"

At that moment we see an angle of a tin can flying through the air. It strikes GOLLUM on the side of the head knocking the beaming smile off his face and almost taking him off his feet at the same time. CHARLIE swerves from an invisible anger round the corner. He grabs a dazed GOLLUM--

CHARLIE

I fucking warned you DIDN'T I!!--

--he's furious, and before VASILIUS and a a couple of nearby workers can stop him he punches GOLLUM full-force and sends him sprawling to the ground. GOLLUMS nose is broken and bleeds profusely, he holds it with an angry sneer on his face, but there is obvious fear in his eyes. Other members of staff all come at the sound of the commotion. Some women are shocked but most of the male staff smile when they see what has happened. CHARLIE stands for a minute, finally GOLLUM speaks.

GOLLUM

Fuck you Charlie! You're dead!

CHARLIE's anger rises once again, he's beyond control now and dashes forward to deliver a kick to GOLLUM'S head- but just as he's moving in we hear a voice in earshot-

STEVE

(loud)

CHARLIE! Step away!

STEVE pushes his way roughly through the crowd of onlookers to the front.

STEVE

What on earth is going on here?

It becomes obvious quickly and he stands between CHARLIE and GOLLUMS now prostrate body.

STEVE

(arguing tones)

I think you better go wait for me in my office Charlie.

CHARLIE

He was fucking asking for it! He can't keep his fucking mouth shut so I closed it for him.

STEVE

That was COMPLETELY unnecessary.

CHARLIE

Ask that lot!(pointing a finger at his colleagues)- I'm not the only one sick of the little shit! I just did what they all wanted to!

He waits for some kind of acknowledgement of his statement from the others but most are too timid to speak up in his defense. STEVE notions for them to clear a path in the direction of the staff offices and stands aside so CHARLIE can walk through, CHARLIE looks mildly disappointed at VASILIUS for not backing him up, and then shoves his way through towards the office. As a closing shot we see STEVE standing above GOLLUM-

GOLLUM

Go on, go get yourself cleaned up at the gents.

JOHN

(under his voice to CLAIRE)

Nice. I ain't had that much fun since me wife told me she wanted a divorce.

INT. STEVE'S OFFICE 2ND FLOOR SUPERMARKET

STEVE leads CHARLIE into a hardly used managerial room in a disorgantised state cluttered with menial paperwork STEVE moves behind an wide desk. He motions CHARLIE to take a seat.

STEVE

(looking melancholic)

Well, I wont beat around the bush Charlie.  I'll have to let you go.

CHARLIE

(shocked)

What?! Come on!

STEVE

Yes. Unfortunately, (points towards a camera in the corner) it's all on tape. Now you know, and we all know Martin is a nuisance - and he will be dealt with after this I can promise you - but you should have gone through the proper channels and launched a complaint.It's the companies Zero Tolerance Policy, you see. Even if I wanted to keep you on, -which obviously I do, you're a hard worker- I couldn't. Any violence under any categorical terms is instant dismissal regardless of the cause.

CHARLIE

But my promotion is just round the corner!

STEVE

I know. (shrugs and raises his hands in an apologetic manner)

CHARLIE

You're the manager aren't you? Can't you, you know- nods at the camera- DO something about that?

STEVE

You mean fiddle with the videos? (smiles) I would if I could. But the data isn't kept here, it's streamed to HQ, -funnily enough to stop managers messing around with the tapes.

CHARLIE

Yeah but they can't be watching all the time. Probably wouldn't even investigate if you left it out of your report.

STEVE

I can't do that Charlie. If I did and someone found out it'd be my job too.

CHARLIE

(pleading)

Come on boss!

STEVE

I've a family to think about Charlie.

They sit and look at each-other but it's inevitable. CHARLIE sits ashen, slowly accepting the situation. Finally stands abruptly to walk out.

STEVE

You'll get your severance within the next two weeks.

CHARLIE

(almost out the door)

Whatever.

INT. BUS RIDE BACK HOME- NIGHT

FRONT CAM ANGLE of Charlie ruminating on an almost empty bus. myriads of night-lights reflect all around him. On his face is a mixture of high-emotion, pain and resentfulness.

INT. BACK INSIDE THE MAIN BAR

It's little past closing time in the pub, when CHARLIE enters he sees FITZGERALD on his own, cleaning glasses behind the counter. FITZGERALD looks up, curious.

FITZGERALD

Eh? Weren't you on shift tonight?

CHARLIE moves over and sits on an empty stool.

CHARLIE

(drawn out)

I hope you've got some whiskey behind there, because I could really use a shot right now.

FITZGERALD

What happened?

CHARLIE

Lost my job.

FITZGERALD

Oh Christ.

CHARLIE

Yup. Must be my lucky year huh?

FITZGERALD pours two shots and gives one to CHARLIE. He leaves the bottle on the counter.

FITZGERALD

Cheers

CHARLIE

Cheers

CHARLIE

Some asshole at work. Always pushing people around. Thought I'd do a bit of pushing back.

FITZGERALD

You got in a fist-fight?

CHARLIE

Yeah. The management didn't see my side of the argument though.

FITZGERALD

Unlucky year alright. (pause) Did you get him with a good one?

CHARLIE

Knocked him flying.

FITZGERALD

Oh well, probably cheered up a few people. There's other jobs.

CHARLIE

Lost my promotion too.

FITZGERALD

Sorry to hear that Charlie.

They sit for a short while. FITZGERALD goes back to cleaning his glasses. CHARLIE takes out a pack of cigarettes and lights one up.

CHARLIE

I'm thinking of going to Japan.

FITZGERALD

What on earth for?

CHARLIE

(matter-of-factly)

To look for Kumiko.


FITZGERALD

(looking stupidified)

That's a tad bit drastic isn't it?

CHARLIE

Yeah, but I can't stop thinking about it. It's driving me crazy. I have to do..something.

FITZGERALD

Just move on and find another girl is my recommendation.

CHARLIE

If I could just do that..But, if I did it would always be on the back of my mind. All I want is an explanation Fitzgerald. Just to see her face to face. I'm not going to be angry, all I want is to see her tell me why and to find some closure. Then I can calm down ,and get on with my life.

FITZGERALD

Still seems barmy to me, going all the way over there. Like chasing shadows.

CHARLIE

You've no idea what I've been going through. Somethings up. I can feel it.

FITZGERALD

Care to elaborate on that a little.

CHARLIE

You don’t just up and leave like that.  Not when you have so much going on with somebody. You’d at least owe it to them a call, not a letter or something.  Just a note on the bed with ‘Goodbye’ written on it for what it’s worth, but something.  She didn’t leave me shit.  Not a whisper, not anything. No, people that are just starting out with each-other who don’t get along, maybe they might break it off like that, but not when they’ve done the time like me and Kumiko have...had.

FITZGERALD

'We had history' It's a cliche, there's so many guys saying the same thing. I hate to say it Charlie but what you're going through is what thousands of people are going through every day.

CHARLIE

I've never had someone special like her.

FITZGERALD

Yeah, because you've never let someone close to you before.

CHARLIE

That's kind of my point. She persevered. Even though I was too timid a fuck to win her over she kept trying. That's why it doesn't make sense, she's not the type too give up easily.

FITZGERALD

(unconvinced)

I think you're just running away.

CHARLIE

What exactly am I running from?- -Some, minimum wage turd of a job - I don’t even fucking have anymore?... - My enviable popularity? Being a fucking junkie?- Don’t do drugs, because escaping from a shit life for   a weekend isn’t doing me any good?- This place?- Two years stuck in a fucking shoebox? You tell me, fucking what?-What could be better than this?

FITZGERALD

Sometimes we end up with the right people. Mostly not. Charlie if I don't tell you, nobody will. You're wasting your time with this girl. She's gone. You'd do yourself a world of good if you set yourself into that mental state.

CHARLIE looks around desperately.

CHARLIE

(pallid, almost tearful)

I can't do without her..it's too much.,it's all too much.

FITZGERALD

(compassionate)

Listen to me, son.I know you’re unhinged. You’ve got a million of these ‘Whys?’ And ‘Ifs?’ running through that head of yours, and it’s consuming you, it’s breaking you down-- and for what? You’ve had a blow, and I wont joke yes it is a big fucking blow, but it doesn’t mean you wont ever laugh again.  Life does go on. You’ve got to stop thinking of love as if it’s something you can conquer tactically, like a game of chess that you can win if you move the pieces into the right places correctly - it’s much more like to a lottery. A poor man’s gamble if you will. You roll the dice.  That’s all you do.  You roll the dice and it is categorically as simple as that. Sometimes you win, sometimes you lose. Mostly you lose. But that’s okay, because even bum gamblers have a lucky break that can last them a last time, they keep trying because they know one day their numbers’ll be coming in, even if it takes half a lifetime. See, you didn’t do anything wrong. You didn't fuck up anything, by trying to seize the happiness that you had and keep a hold on it.  It's all down to her. Nobody could have guessed in a million years that she was going to leave. Not me, not anybody who had met her. But it's done. She's gone. People, you know, you can never bet on. Get on with your life. Just give it some time and you'll be as sweet as mothers milk, you'll see.

CHARLIE sits absorbing FITZGERALDs advice. He takes another sip, finishing the whiskey, and outwardly at least seems to regain himself inside a little. 

CHARLIE

Okay. Thanks.

Stands up to go with the glass. Reaches over to take the whiskey bottle. FITZGERALD shoots him an anxious glance and then relaxes.

FITZGERALD

Go on then.

EXT. QUIET LONDON STREETS - NIGHT

The wind howls mournfully around the metal buildings, dry and cold.

INT. CHARLIE'S BEDROOM ABOVE THE PUB- LATE NIGHT

It's a long night for CHARLIE. He stares at the ceiling on his bed, a nearby bottle of whiskey and glass on the cabinet beside it, he takes occasional sips. He's drunk and philosophical- it's been hell these past few weeks. Blue shade from the street illuminates his face in the quiet moonlight. A SHOT of his hand reveals the picture of KUMIKO clasped there tightly. Another SHOT of his drunken blood shot eyes becoming heavier and he falls into a deep, restless sleep. Slowly we FADE TO BLACK as his hand falls to the bed.

INT. ROSE & CROWN PUB. - MID-AFTERNOON

It's afternoon and the bulk of the lunch crowd have dissipated from the bar, leaving only a couple of tourists and elderly customers sitting around quietly. FITZGERALD enters, coming in and checks on the staff, he wipes the bar quickly and then we see him head upstairs to see how Charlie is doing. He knocks on the door and enters.

INT. CHARLIE'S ROOM. - NEXT DAY

CHARLIE's room has had a miraculous transformation. It's sparse, almost everything has been tidied, folded and almost every personal item has been carefully packed into boxes. CHARLIE has been busy all morning, he looks up as FITZGERALD walks in, stopping what he's doing. FITZGERALD is gob-smacked, but seconds later, realisation kicks in.

FITZGERALD

Are you leaving us Charlie?

CHARLIE

I'm sorry Roy. Yes. I'm going. I'm going today. To Japan.

FITZGERALD

Wow.

CHARLIE

Sorry to ignore your advice, but it's something I have to do.

FITZGERALD

(accepting)

Well..Oh well then. You’re your own best Uncle in the end. You know what they say about me, full of shit most days even before I start drinking. Find most of my answers at the bottom of the bottle.

CHARLIE

No. You're right in a way. Maybe this is an exercise in futility. But either way I need to get something in motion. So, what the hell. Call it a holiday if nothing else. I'll be back.

FITZGERALD

I suppose. Worst thing that can happen is you come crawling back, skint as a fart but with a bit of travel in you. Nothing like going abroad for 'broadening' your  horizons.  Probably have a couple of stories in you to tell before you start becoming a melancholic little bastard again too.

CHARLIE

(chuckling)

No. I'm done with that. That's the old Charlie.

FITZGERALD

How are you sorted for cash?

CHARLIE

(breaths in through teeth)

Yeeeah. Well. Plane ticket aside, I’m sort of- well, broker than the day I was born, truth be told. Probably even worse off since The General had a trust fund for me back then. Got a few hundred but you know, something'll turn up.

FITZGERALD

That’s alright, the Bank of Fitzgerald will sort you out.  I’m not too rich as you well know, but a grand – that I can lend you. I say lend. That also means I'll keep you to your word you're coming back, to pay me back the loan if nothing else.  That should be enough and hopefully a little more for you to do what you’ve got to do.

CHARLIE

(stunned)

Really..?? Jesus Roy..can't thank you enough.

FITZGERALD

When's the flight?

CHARLIE

Tonight! Ten-thirty.

FITZGERALD

Fucking hell. You don't piss about eh?

CHARLIE

Thought I'd better get on a plane  before I have second-thoughts.

FITZGERALD

Alright. Well. Let me get off to the bank then and I'll drop you off at the airport.

CHARLIE

OK. I'll just finish off here then.

FITZGERALD makes an exit, we see CHARLIE watch him as he leaves for longer than necessary.

2 HOURS LATER. BAR

FITZGERALD walks back in and goes up to Charlie's room. It's clear something is amiss immediately. CHARLIE's stuff has been sealed and hidden away in the closet, the bedsheets folded and put away. On top of the matress FITZGERALD finds a hurriedly scribbled note.

NOTE

'I can't think of anyone I'm going to miss more than you, and I can't thank you enough for being with me through thick and thin. You're more of a father to me than my real one ever was. But there's nothing I hate more than goodbyes. Sorry. Why don't you use the money you were going to give me and go on a nice fishing trip or something? See you in a few months Roy...Love,

Charlie '

We close up to FITZGERALD's face, serene, a twinkle in his eye.

FITZGERALD

(to himself)

Could have payed the bloody rent first before leaving..

EXT. PLANE

HORIZONTAL SHOT of the plane from a distance flying into the pendulous night clouds. Closing in we see night-lights of TOKYO, JAPAN closing in. Zoom forward to an impossible SHOT of CHARLIE viewing the spectacle from the seat window. He's excited and anxious. In his hands he holds the picture of KUMIKO tightly.

INT. TRAIN FROM NARITA- DAY

Similar SHOT as before- this time from a local train taking CHARLIE from the airport into the train-stop that appears on the address he got from KUMIKO. TOKYO. We see the sign of the stop, and pan down to the note to see it's the same address, FUNABORI. It's still Tokyo, but the crowds are rather thin in the station- there's not many people about.

EXT. SKYLINE SHOT TOKYO SUBURBS- SUNSET

CHARLIE walks up a hill with a heavy backpack on. A tranquil, poetic sight. Everything in presence is coated with the amber evanescance of the setting sun. Leaves spin around in gusts of wind. The scene plays out almost as if in slow motion, people on bikes. A fruit store with several old ladies checking the paucity of watermelons. High-school kids with sailor uniforms pass-by, smiling and chatting in gleeful tones. It spreads out for miles and miles. To your average Japanese person it's what they see every day but for CHARLIE it's quite the stirring scene.

EXT. CITY STREETS, FUNABORI- NIGHT

A tired and irritable CHARLIE walks the streets. The weather has turned to light rain, we see him pause to notice but it hasn't become heavy enough to bother him yet. He has been searching for more than 2 hours for the place on the note. We see him asking people for directions caveman-style- a businessman, a taxi-driver. Eventually we see him reach what appears to be the area, look around confusedly. It's appears to be nothing more than a 7-11. He steps inside, looks about for a bit, then goes up to the cashier. He pulls out his crumpled note:

CHARLIE

Sorry, um, this jusho ha kore? (this...address?)

The CASHIER takes a look at it. Nods. Hands it back. CHARLIE stares at him absently for a few seconds. The CASHIER takes a pamphlet from behind the counter. On it is a stamp with the shop address, and shows the matching kanji on it to that of the Japanese on the note.

CHARLIE

(dumbfounded)

Nobody lives here?

CASHIER

Eeeto. sorry?

CHARLIE

Um..hito...um...darka, dare ka koko ni sumimasuka? (does. somebody live here?)

CASHIER

No. Just shop.

CHARLIE

(pointing)

Upstairs?

CASHIER

Eeeto desu ne. box (gestures) many box. no person

CHARLIE takes a deep breath. It's over. The note, like the rest of it, was a faux. He registers its uselessness in his hands, tosses it over the counter childishly, and exits. The rain is heavier now. Bothersome.

EXT. STREET - NIGHT

CHARLIE meanders aimlessly. CAMERA follows his path. It's late night, there has been little time for him to look for a hotel. The rain has soaked him through his clothes but he's too mentally distraught to care. He trudges along until he finds a small ceremonial park bench, which he slumps onto unceremoniously.POV angle of the bare streets with no-one in sight. Finally the rain subsides but he is still sat there, empty-minded. The scenes cut to show hours passing by. It becomes more late, reaching midnight. He realises it's time to move on, find somewhere to stay, and jumps up JUST as a guy on a bike is tearing by. The bicyclist is moving to fast to dodge CHARLIE though he does try, and ends up catapulting himself off the front handlebar when he veers into a railing.We see a pair of feet approaching - pan up, it's a guy, late-twenties, stubble, very blonde, tiny bit portly but not enough to lose the jawline. Eyes visibly clear and blue even in the dark. Not handsome but what some girls might call cute & cuddly type. His name is REMO. American Boston accent.

REMO

(on the floor)

O-mae nani yatteru ka? (What the hell, man?)

His eyes scrutinize the scene properly- he realises he's not talking to a Japanese person. He picks himself up.

REMO

(shaking his fist)

Goddamn tourist huh? Your glasses not get through immigration or what?

CHARLIE would usually have a sarcastic remark at this point but tonight has all been too much. He looks away.

CHARLIE

Sorry.

REMO

Yeah, you goddamn should be you sonofa... (registers CHARLIE's distinct apathy)..yeah..well.. watch the street next time, you know?

CHARLIE

Okay amigo.

REMO

Yeah, don't go jumping in peoples..um.hey...whatcha you doing out here anyway? Cats'n'dogs out here ya know? You got all your shit in that backpack there?

CHARLIE

Yeah

REMO

Fuck man, it's soaked through. Hope you're not carrying anything other than clothes...

REMO

(imitating an East-Ender)

Heeey, I spot a London accent there old chap!

CHARLIE

--

REMO

Sorry, haha. So what's the deal here bro?

CHARLIE hopes to ignore him but clearly REMO is concerned. A few seconds pass until finally-

CHARLIE

(inhaling)

Okay..Well, basically, I'm....well, for lack of a better word-- fucked.

REMO

(grinning)

Yeah? In what way?

CHARLIE

Ahhh..well, let's just say a certain friend of mine screwed me over, and here I am, in the rain.

REMO

I was gonna say. Ever heard of that little invention called an umbrella?

CHARLIE

Haha, very funny.

REMO

Well what the hell you doing out here boy? You even got a place to stay?

CHARLIE shrugs.

REMO

Got money?

CHARLIE

Some. Not a fortune.

REMO

If you need a place to stay I can help you out- just tonight.

CHARLIE

CHARLIE looks around hesitantly, finally nodding his head in resolution.

REMO

Don't jump out of your skin to thank me.

CHARLIE

Do you know anywhere?

REMO

As it happens I do. It's not the Grand Hyatt or nothing but...it's --

CHARLIE

OK.

REMO

--close.


REMO picks up his bicycle to push it and motions for CHARLIE to follow him.  CHARLIE starts after him like a old-steam train that's been out of service for years. LONG ANGLES of them walking along, through a shopping district and into the suburbian areas, CHARLIE slightly behind, REMO on his bulky mobile phone talking to some other foreigner-

REMO

(on phone)

..yeah pimp, like I said, it's an easy job, Souji arranges the trial lessons, you go along and...what?..yeah.no. you don't have to buy the coffee. What's the big deal about a coffee? Jesus Christ man, it's only 300 yen or something. You're getting enough for the job.  Besides it ain't hard-work, talking to some little smoking hottie for an hour over a coffee...yeah, I know you're married, but you get the point,damn- some people..oh- I just remembered you're one is a guy actually...man, all you ever do is talk about how broke you are and here I am trying to do the right thing by you and you're telling me you're not interested, you can kiss my ass man...yeah whatever...seriously I'm done with you, don't waste my time nougat-head..-

Hangs up. CHARLIE takes the opportunity to talk. He's livened up a little from earlier.

CHARLIE

Hey sorry I was in a mood before. I want to say thanks-- for all this.

REMO

Oh? Well, wait till you see the place before you thank me. What's your name by the way?

CHARLIE

Charlie.

REMO

Hey, I'm Remo De Marco. (waits in anticipation for something)You know, REMO, like in that movie!

CHARLIE

What movie?

REMO

Remo Unarmed BUT Dangerous? That fighting flick?

CHARLIE

Never heard of it.

REMO

Shit man.

CHARLIE

I got a friend back home who's kung-fu movie crazy.

REMO

Oh yeah? Must be a cool guy..

CHARLIE

Ummm...

The rain stops. 5 MINUTES PASS and they arrive outside at a garish grey multi-block building. Most buildings in Japan are below 40 years old, this building is particularly derelict, old and in dire need of some new reconstruction. CHARLIE traces his finger along a wall and surfs a clean white line along the grimy wall. The windows are dirtied-out.

REMO

I know I know.. All this shit is from selfish foreigners who come here for a while and then vanish at a moments notice- leaving this asshole here me to deal with all their leftover crap. Been meaning to take care of this for a while, but..you know..

CHARLIE

You own this place?

REMO

No, but I kind of rent-control is all. Just assist the Japanese owners, you know, get people in here,  in finding people to live in this dump- *ahem* wonderful residency. See- most Japanese people don't like to live in buildings like this. Westerners- on the other hand- are less complacent.

CHARLIE

Tourists like me?

REMO

They come and go. Mostly just the same dudes who live here all the time though. Same bunch of freeloaders.

CHARLIE

And now you've got an extra one.

REMO taps on a gign by the door with a smiley-face symbol above it "HAPPY HOUSE- WE WELCOME YOUR HAPPY SMILES"-

CHARLIE

Like anyone ever smiled coming in here.

As he goes to slide open the door REMO does a badly-timed and embarassingly poor impression of Axel Rose from 'Welcome to the Jungle'-

REMO

(squawking)

Do you know where you aaaaaareee?? You're in the jungle baby!!

Slides open the door.

CHARLIE

(trying not to cringe)

Front door isn't locked?

REMO

Nope. This is Japan, don't worry. It doesn't get safer than here.

INT: GAIJIN HOUSE, TOKYO

 A long corridor with rooms serves as a repository for junk. Torn easy-chairs, Dust-covered TV's, bed-springs, chairs, dozens of damp old futons stacked-up. Rank with old dirt. They both stare at the mess, CHARLIES face is pure disgust, REMO's admiration.

REMO

Yep, you wouldn't think people get girls back here, but they do- Oh, leave your shoes at the entrance.

CHARLIE

(taking off shoes)

Wouldn't want to get this place dirty right?.

REMO

Where's that accent from anyway, dude?

CHARLIE

London. England.

REMO

Oh coold country, went on a trip there once a long time ago. Sweet. Okay, I'll show you the kitchen down here.

The corridor has poor illumination and in some alcolves along the way candles did the job a replaced lightbulb could have, their flames waving in the breeze let in by drafty, ill-fitted windows alongside them.  Remo quietly swore to himself when he tripped on an old portable heater left in the darkness with all the other junk some home-sailing foreigners had left behind instead of disposing of. Interspersed like shirt-buttons along were the small, boxy rooms that the residents lived in. POV CHARLIE pan of 4 rooms as we pass. Mixed sounds as he walks;- TV blaring commercials in Japanese, a bit of American rock & roll- The BeachBoys 'Don't Worry Baby' echoes from somewhere-, an English lesson being taught from a man to a woman, two men talking in Arabic, and in a dark but occupied room the snoring of a man. Three of the rooms are empty.

We think we hear voices in the kitchen, but when we go through the room is vacant and calm. The room is part kitchen/part living room. Exhibited within is a reflection of disorganised lives; a garish wicker mat dominates the entire kitchen floor in company with an old yellowed refrigerator, the walls are completely surfaced over with posters,placards,pamphlets- local nightclubs, places to see, general English information etc is all up there- and the sink is FULL of dirty dishes. In the lounge; well-used dart board, a TV, a shelf full of English books, a cracked L-shaped leather couch that nestles the walls is home to a giant TEDDY BEAR with a split marble eye. Flecks of powder plaster fill the creases of the couch and the floor- the consequence of badly-aimed darts that missed and hit the wall. On every resting place can be seen diverse objects of junk- from joke sex toys to empty beer bottles- essentially the room serves as repository of leftovers- the aftermath of the many visitors that have come and gone.

On the pillar that divides the kitchen side from the living room CHARLIE looks at a cork panel brimming with photos of foreigners having fun in Japan, and postcards of people writing to 'HAPPY HOUSE' about their lives after returning to their respective countries. "Missing Japan guys!"-"Wish I could go back!"-etc

REMO

(pointing out)

All the folks before you.

CHARLIE

Been a ton of people here eh?

REMO

Quite a few- Tight-little ass on that one chick there eh?- OK. Time to show you to your suite, sir.

Takes CHARLIE back out to the corridor and along to an empty room. REMO searches his pockets for keys:

REMO

Look, um- what was your name again?

CHARLIE

Charlie

REMO

Charlie. Look Charlie I'm not going to beat about- I'll tell you straight. You're probably thinking that you're going to get some early sleep tonight but the thing is see, we just had so many foreigners coming in and out of this place and leaving their shit around that there just wasn't anywhere to dump it you see, and ah fuck it- just see for yourself-

REMO puts the key in and opens the door. He goes in and flicks the light switch.

CHARLIE

Fuck, man.

REMO

YEAH. We figured we'd put all the crap in the empty rooms until we found the time to get the garbage guys round...

CHARLIE looks in. It's a mess. The room is full to the brim with junk. Small that it is it is completely full of stacked furniture and rubbish. There is a stack of chairs in one corner, an 8 foot pile of used futons in the other, and black bin-liners full of rubbish are heaped all over the place preventing any movement. A small cooking area. CHARLIE can barely step through the door for junk. The floor is barely visible beneath thousands of sheets of carelessly scattered literature, beer cans everywhere.

REMO

(tittering)

Don't worry, we only get the roaches here in the winter.

CHARLIE wonders if he is joking or not. REMO goes over to the dust filled sink and turns the tap on. Covered in protective duct tape. The plumbing under the cabinet groans but soon a steady flow of water begins to trinkle from the tap. 

REMO

  Wow. Motherfucker actually works. (points to the sink) Don't piss in this. Toilet is down the hall ok?

CHARLIE looks at him incredulously

REMO

Hey I know I know. People do that sometimes, not saying you're one of them. Anyway CHARLIE- there's a dumpster round the corner but I'll be making sure I get some guys round to clear up all the shit in the gallery next week, so just throw all this crap out into the hall ok? Earn your keep.

CHARLIE

Alright

REMO's phone begins to ring. He steps outside for a second. Muffled conversation we cant catch. Sudden CRACK of a thunderstorm beginning outside. The rain begins to pour down again. REMO comes back in.

REMO

Sounds like thunder..- else Godzillas back in town. (laughs at his own joke) Anyway, sorry I can't help you clean this place up but I've just heard I've got some business to take care of.


CHARLIE watches him leave.

CHARLIE

Remo.

REMO

Yeah?

CHARLIE

Thanks.

REMO

Don't worry about it.

CHARLIE

Seriously I owe you man.

REMO

Hey, you probably would've done the same right. Tomorrow are you free? Shit- course you are right? I'll come see how you're doing, if you're still here. If you want to stay longer you'll have to pay me rent. It ain't much though.

CHARLIE

Sure. See you.

REMO

Bye

REMO wanders off, whistling as he goes.

CHARLIE tastes the silence of the room for a minute. LONG SHOT of his face, expressionless. Seems quiet and pleasant for a minute- enjoying the rain-  when suddenly the silence is broken by the  ear-piercing rattle of a train outside the window. The room shakes. CHARLIE's eyes roll back as he realises the local elevated train line run directly outside his window.

SEVERAL SHOTS of CHARLIE resolutely cleaning the room which takes him all night. We see him piece by piece getting the junk out of the room and into the corridor, ANOTHER SHOT scrubbing the walls and sink clean, which shine up well after the duct tape is removed l after he took the duct] tape off and gave it a few hard scrubs.  NEXT SHOT CHARLIE has space- finds a hanger and puts up his wet clothes, changes into jeans and a t-shirt from his backpack. Still a little wet. NEXT SHOT CHARLIE spraying a can of air freshener he discoveres in one of the bin bags lined up against the wall, and finding and unrolling a semi-decent futon in one of the cupboards that didn't look like it had been affected much by the conditions of the room. He looks exhausted but fights on. Finally we see the room is bare and clean. He sits cross legged on the futon for a few seconds then falls back fast asleep. Soon the days events came wondering into his mind.

FEW MIXED SHOTS-

-The shop-keepers face telling him

-The bus with Kumiko next to him, her hands cupped around a large latte.  She nods at him and smiles, pearly whites peeking from behind pink cushion lips, . They are talking but the voices are inaudible- drowned out by the background music. She's laughing at some imaginery joke he'd told her. In the dream he visit the toilet on the bus, and when he comes back her seat is empty- QUICK SHOT CHANGE TO-

INT. GAIJIN HOUSE LATE MORNING

-ANGLE of CHARLIES face as he wakes up suddenly. LOUD VOICE outside his room. Australian accent.

MAN

Bloody thing. Come on you little bastard.

CHARLIE yawns, stands up. Coughs. Goes to investigate. Outside he sees an Australian guy. Over-dyed blonde hair.